David Rewriting instructions

I wrote instructions that should have clear, simple steps so you don’t confuse the person reading them.

Can you make these various instructions easier to understand?

Pick up an egg, gently hit it against the side of a bowl and empty the contents into a clean bowl.	Get an egg, tap it against a bowl in tell it crack in half and then pour the content into a clean bowl.
Open the fridge and take out the butter. Take off the lid. Get a knife and use it to scoop some butter. Rub the knife onto the toast.	Get the butter from the fridge and then take off the lid. Use a knife to rub the butter onto the toast.
Hold the two shortest sides of paper and bend them together. Squeeze them so that the paper is now in half.	Hold to side of the paper and then bend them to getter. Squeeze it so it in half.
When you hear the sound of the whistle, move one leg in front of the other as quickly as you can.	When the whistle blow put one leg in front of the other fast as you can.
When player One had rolled the dice, they should hand it to player Two, who should then roll it too. The person with the highest score moves their counter first.	When player one had rolled the dice it is time for player two to rolled the dice. The person that score highest  they then move the counter first.
If you want to turn on the computer, look for the round, lack power button and press it once.	When you turn on the computer you have to look for the power button and press it once to turn it on.
Hold the handles of the scissors and cut along the dotted line, making sure you don’t hurt yourself.	Hold the scissors and cut along the dotted line and make sure you don’t hurt yourself.
Before you start mixing the ingredients, switch on the oven and turn the dial to 140 degrees.	Before you start mixing, turn on the oven and turn the dial to 140 degrees.
Take the lid off the glue stick and rub the glue on the tab, being careful not to get any glue on your clothes.	Take off the lid for the glue and rub it on the tab, be careful not to get any glue on you.
When you have planted your seed, pick up the pot and move it near to a window where it will get lots of sunlight.	When you planted your seed, pick up the pot and move it next to the window with heap of sun light.

Coke+Mentos

I got to watch coke and mentos experiment and write about it

Soda+Mentos

Purpose: What do you want to learn/find out?

What fizzy drink exploded the highest. How and what made it to pop.

Hypothesis: Try to predict the answer to the problem. Another term for hypothesis is ‘educated guess’. This is usually stated like ” If I…(do something) then…(this will occur)

I think the diet coke would explode the highest because people say the diet coke is best to use for coke experiment. The lowest I think that going to fail is the fanta.

Materials: List everything you will need to conduct your experiment.

Fizzy drink and mentos.

Experiment procedure: The fun part! Design a test or procedure to confirm or disprove your hypothesis. Write down each step so that someone else could do the same experiment.

Buy heaps of bottle of fizzy drink and buy heaps of mentos and get a geyser. Or you can just get one for mentos and one fizzy drink. Get 1 drink, take off the lid, fill the geyser with mentos and then put the geyser on top of the drink bottle. Pull the string connected to the geyser and there the explosion and do it to each one.

Analysis/Data: Record what happened during the experiment.

I had to watch a video clip because I was not here so I will tell you about what I saw from the video clip. So I was watching a boy. he got heaps of fizzy drink and heaps of mentos of course. He did heaps explosion and it was high and the highest I thought was big red.

Conclusion:Review the data and check to see if your hypothesis was correct.

I thought that the diet coke would be the highest but big red was the highest so I was wrong but the diet coke was close to beating it. Fanta wasn’t the lowest it was one of the highest  and the pepsi was an epic fail.

Physical vs Chemical change.

                                         
WALT: Understand the difference between a chemical and physical change.
My teacher set my reading group a task to do and it about the difference between physical and chemical change.

Attitude talk with Paula

                                             A guy name Paula came in to my block and talk with us about attitude.

The Young Boy

We go a picture of a young boy and had to right about him. It could be anything we wanted it to be and I did it as a young boy name Jeff who went to the pool with friend but didn't knew he was allow. Here is the then
picture we have to right about.

 Narrative writing

One sunny early morning a boy name Jeff woke up excited forgetting that he was grounded. Once he  was wide awake he ran down the stair ate breakfast like a cheetah when he finish it plate was clean like the other clean plate. He ran and got ready for the pool in his bedroom once he pack he play call of duty black ops 3 online waiting for his friend to come.

While he was playing games on his ps4 one of his friend came and then they played the game together while waiting for other to come.They were having challenge offline killing each other and bot. One by one friend came once they all came there were about 12 of them playing games. Tick tock tick tock 11 o’clock they got snack for when they were hungry and off they go.

Once they all pack their ready to go but just as then his mum came in and ask where are they going and then Jeff replied calmly we are going to the pool and then mum said no you're not you're grounded remember ‘’but mum the pool are right near’’said Jeff ‘’no you're grounded and tell your friend to go home. Jeff was sadly embarrass in front of his friend  and the Jeff mum left the room. No I’ll sneak out let go out the window.Once they were in the pool he saw a girl he like and so he try to act all cool until his mum was going to his room to just let him go because she felt sad for him but just then he was not the ‘’ I wonder where he is’’ said mum right then she knew the he was gone to the pool And of she went.

Once got there her son already noticed that she was look for him so he duck under the water  waiting for his mum to go but all the friend knew that Jeff mum was looking for him but they didn’t tell the mum until the mum ask one of the friend and he pointed to under the water that the mum was right on top on and then she look and embarrass him in front of every in the pool. They both went home the mum was angry and the son was heavy hearted and lonely and the  mum felt sad about embarrassing him in front of his friend so she took him to Mcdonald's and Jeff felt sad for not listening and so they went back home and carried on.   

Violet Walround Olympic Swimmer

                                            WALT:Skim and scan for key information. Make Inferences.
I read a story about Violet Walround, she was a Olympic swimmer in the 1920 Olympic game .

Rowing to the Olympic

                                         
WALT:Identify the main ideas within a text.
This week we read the story about rowing to the Olympic and had to answer the question that was given to us.

Cross country day

Cross country day

(Sorry I was at cross country this year so i’m going to write to you my last cross country.) It was a brightly sunny day as I woke up with fear in heart knowing it was cross country. As I got ready for school cleaning my teeth white washing my face clean and putting on my uniform and off I go to school.

Tick tock tick tock it was time for cross country as I was waiting my group to  walk up to the starting line, as we was nervous. Get mark Get set clap Mr Burt said and clap with the bricks  once it clap year 5 boy shot off running. Of we go just entered the reserve almost getting tired.I was watching my friend sprinting ahead but I kept jogging.

Right in middle when my fist clench as jogging tiredly my heart was racing my leg were spaghetti  sweating so hard  I thought I would collapse but I kept going. I was coming 7th  place  right near the beach  as I pass someone and now coming 6th place.I took a break and walk until a friend jog by and told to keep going the finish line is near  and so I kept going.

It was a relief to see the finish line and cross it, it felt good, it was finally over as I walk over a cup drink that was provided for the people who finish the race. I sat down on the grass cheering the other runner on. Once cross country finish the whole school went back to class and pack up ready for home.  

David the strength of root

                                        WALT: Identify language features of the text and sentence types.

We read called the strength of root and had to answer question that was given to us

Comic Man

                                              This task is about comic first we had answer question and then find comic creator and then find a website and make our own comic. Click here  to go to the web site I use. Enjoy.

The house

                                                This is a reading task i had to do it is called the house. I wrote 3 paragraph to go with it. It about a  retired  soccer coach  who is looking for another job because he is wanting to coach again.

Albert woke up at 6.am  He said to himself he need a job First He  Went and brush his teeth wash his face cone his heir and then eat breakfast  and get ready for a early morning run when  the sun was out it was beautiful to have a run. He was a retired soccer coach that use to coach Argentina in 2001 Albert is in his late 30.

While Albert Was running he he went to buy himself some    up & go drink as he was buying  his drink he saw  the principal  of Harvard university Jeff, Albert went over and ask Jeff if he could coach his soccer team Jeff recognise Albert and said ‘’I know you, you use to train the Argentina team from 1997 to 2001 and so  Jeff let  Albert be the senior manager of soccer of course Albert was so stoke. Jeff said he start on Monday onward.

Albert went home happy  and starting to get back to his old self again. To him it felt like he was training Argentina again It felt great for him teaching again. Some time Albert took his 2 child  to training and his children out skills Albert team.

Free writing 2

My literacy class had write some thing of our choice and chose to write about my and my dream is called Pizza World. Hope you enjoin it.

     Pizza world

One Night I was eating stuff crust  with my family and it was yummy I could feel the cheese  mounting in my mouth and it was so delicious as I demolish my plate with pizza. Who like pizza hut because that where I got my pizza from. As I was going to brush my teeth getting ready for bed I was still wonderng with that delicious pizza I could still feel some of the leftover pizza in my mouth but it was gone when I finish brushing  my teeth.

As I was sleeping I `dream I was a pizza in a pizza world. Everything was pizza except for the the building and the earth but what was pizza was human, animal, bed's everything. I started walking and people start looking at me I was wondering why they were looking at me am I famous turn out I am famous I’m am the one holding the recorder for the highest jump it was just one meter jump and I thought other thing like singing, rap music sport were most popular in pizza world just like planet earth but turn out it was record that was popular and I only had about 3 which was highest jump (one meter) and the pizza with the most pepperoni Oh yeah there were pizza dragon and I got to ride one and that was a record the bravest pizza to ride a dragon the other pizzas thought the dragon was a vicious anger dragon turn out it was just a walking teddy bear. I was starting to break heaps of record became more popular and famous.I was so happy for breaking heaps of pizza record.

‘’Wake up’’ ‘’Wake up’’ it was just my brother try to wake me up for school. I woke up getting for ready for school wondering about my dream about pizza world so I just  let it go. I thought to myself thing if it exists turn out it was just a dream.  

I’m going to write a poem about pizza and why it one of my favourite food.

 Pizza  cheese mounting in my mouth as if is a cheese mounting on a grill

    I like pizza

      Zing I saw a walking pizza

       ''Zig''zag boom pizza

           A pizza pepper pizza pepper pick the pepper by the pizza

              

               

      

Matariki

                                               We write about matariki

Free wirting

Hospital Stair

On sunday  (12th of june 2016) I got to go and see my nana at the hospital. I went with my sister. On sunday morning my family got up to go and drop my sister and I to the hospital but first we have to go and get my sister and me some snack to eat there while we looking after our nana.

Once we got to pak'nsave me and my sister got to go with my mum inside to chose what we wanted to eat.

‘’Aaa’’ (brev) finally  at the hospital as I went in with my mum and sister my mum came inside to show us where my nana is because she is still in the emergency center still looking for bed in the upper level. My nana is in there because she fainted at pak'nsave while I was at the library with my sister. My mum left the hospital and it was just me my sister and nana at the hospital except the other people there. ‘’Hmmm’’ I said to myself so I grab out a bag of chips and start watching soccer clips on my netbook. 12:45 as it felt boring as my chips ran out and then I told my sister ‘’I’m going for run’’ I said to my sister ‘’you can’t go run in hospital’’ ‘’yes I can run stair of the hospital’’ what you liar’’ so of  I went. Going down the elevator to  level one. ‘’Ahhhh’’ ‘’ to run’’ as I was running I began to get tired. ‘’At last I have reach level 9 but some was odd there were more stair on top of me turn out it was just the stair to the roof top. So I just exit the staircase on level nine and down the elevator to level 2.

It been awhile since I came back from my run And also eating those yummy biscuits. After 19 episode of fairy tail. 6:45 my mum came to pick me and my sister up we all went home.

It help to have a hero

My class had to do a task about It help to have a hero. Do you have a here WALT:Identify the main ideas.

remarkably rite

My literacy class had task to do and it about remarkably rite

Poem

I had a presentation to do and learn about poem ant the key point are and what are they about. When I've finish my task (which I have) I got to read some poem (written by famous poem writer)and then I have to write a review on my favourite poem.

The poem I like

The poem I like was thriller because michael jackson is my favourite artist and the one who wrote the poem.what they have in it is amazing. And how they did the poem at the right time and that low voice.

Poetry

My literacy class had to write three poems of our choice. 

We got your back

We have to write about a lesion i lern and the lesion is soo tauau. Thig I would to do if some one is down I would offer my love and suppourte thorw friendship and I would ask them if they are ok and what hapen and be friend with him.

wall nail art

me and my buddies lomio-lee had to do wool and nail for our inquiry fisrt we have to around a picture of a star and then when we  finish we bad to take the picture of the wood and the put string aroud them.

Abduction

this writing was to use my imagination to write a story about a picture. 

 Abduction     

One morning as the sun was rising and shine on the beautiful flower two parent woke up at 7:00 o’clock in the morning and said to each other in a so sad  voice that it was time to tell their young son that he was  adopted and his name was Jerry with a blond fade hair and also tall and didn’t knew he was adopted because it happen at a young age and now he 11 year old and his parent fought it was time to tell him and can handle it.

When Jerry woke up at 8:00 o'clock in the morning he went to eat his breakfast he eat like lawn mower because he was in a rush when he finished there was nothing left ‘’can I go play with my friend’s today’’ said Jerry mum replied in a sad voice ‘’yes an befor you go there is some thing me and your father need tell you you are adopted’’ as started to rubbed with a red face and his eye starting to cover with tear he ran to his room and started crying huge amount of tear was covering in tear when his parent knew he could not take it they were afraid to tell him his real parent die when he was a little baby so they had no choice but to adopt him. When he heard that he wanted to see their grave and so they took them their.

Once they got to the grave it was so sad to see the grave. Minutes was ticking by until the two step parent cheer up and also jerry they had a great idea they will celebrate their birthday but it was not even their birthday. When they finish they went back home.

Fair Chocolate

                                     
Walt learning to make inferences from what the author what the author isn't telling us.

David pocket money

                         
My task was to make inferences within the text. 

WALT Add tow numbers together