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Friday, 22 August 2014

Punctuating Sports Paragraph


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sports is usually a competitive physical activity sometimes sports are organised or just for fun people are usually in teams and sometimes they are just for individuals sports can help people to learn new skills and techniques and it can be heaps of fun too sometimes sports is entertaining for participants and spectators how do you feel about sports
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Sports is usually a competitive physical activity. And is organised or just for fun people are usually in teams and sometimes they are just for individuals sports. Can  help people to learn new skills, and techniques. And it can be heaps of fun too. Sometimes sports is entertaining for participants and spectators how do you feel about sports?.

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