commonwealth sport animation rubric

here is a rubric that I've have done to show how good is animation

Men of the School

hurry up fatman well be late called kiwa stamping on the veranda with his big bag over his shoulder kotuku ran outside before his two older brothers left without him the three boys joshua kiwa and kotuku nearly always walked to school together today they actually hurried

‘’Hurry up fat-Man we’ll be late’’ called Kiwa stamping on the veranda with his big bag over his shoulder. Kotuku ran outside before his two older brothers left with-out him. The three boys ,Joshua, Kiwa and Kotuku nearly always walked to school together today. They actually hurried.

Here is my paragraph. Look and see where I have put the correct punctuation marks.

Helping others

Galatians chapter 6 verses 9 and 10. -10 So let’s not allow ourselves to get fatigued doing good. At the right time we will harvest a good crop if we don’t give up, or quit. Right now, therefore, every time we get the chance, let us work for the benefit of all, starting with the people closest to us in the community of faith. We were learning to sew and it was so fun.

David Cross Country 2014

 Have you ever heard of cross country before? As I walk to the starting line I told  my friend that  I’m  starting to feel sick and that I would come last.  When it was time to run I ran fast as I could and I saw my other friend finlay fall down to the ground but I just ran.

I exited  the outside the  school ground . Once we pass all marshalls we reached the paddocks, I could feel mud squishing my toes.  I was at the pt England reserve. I started to walk a bit with my friend Angelo and and we were so puffed out that I never made it . After a while I started to run I started to run for a little bit then I began to jog then my friend Hosea caught up.

When me and ngelo were running  Hosea gassed it from halfway on the bottom field then he started jogging. Then I ran as fast as I could but angelo beat me. but didn't care because I ran for fun.  

My goal is for next year do more better than this year .Maybe I can try hard and then I could come 1st place .

why pig snuffler in the dirt

I made presentation to show why pig snuffler in the dirt

Game On Question Key about tonga

                 

I have made a Question Key ant the answer is tonga

david all about me poem

This afternoon we are learning to be positive  about our selves.Here is a poem that i wrote about me.

Niue

The Fox and the Tiger

                                       We are learning to understand the author’s point of view. Here is what I think the author is trying to tell us in this story.